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Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18
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0 posted 2006-07-09 06:32 PM


ALCOHOLIC HOBO


I'm just a hobo, who hides on the train;
I've got me a bottle, which feeds, on my brain.
All I once owned has been stolen or sold,
All I have left, are my memories of old.

I had a fine house, a family and sports cars;
I threw them all away for whiskey and bars.
I do most my dining from dumpsters and cans.
What you would call garbage, I eat with my hands.

I'm just a sad soul, the saddest in town.
Sometimes I look like a sick circus clown.
I lean on a lamppost in the bad part of town,
In search of a doorway, where I might bed down.

I dream of those bands that played in the park,
And all of those ladies, I kissed in the dark.
Those days are gone now, like the setting of the sun.
I’m just an old stallion that can no longer run.

Deprived of those blessings I once had in life,
I now bust my bottle and use it for a knife.
The blood of my veins shall freeze on the street;
Where tomorrow they’ll find at my defeat.


By Tom Zart
Author of
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© Copyright 2006 Tom Zart - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
1 posted 2006-07-09 07:00 PM


This is so heartwrenching.  You've aptly pictured the downward spiral of alcoholism and it's tragic ending.

   Rae

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
2 posted 2006-07-09 09:36 PM


Tom,

A very well crafted portrait and poem that tells a very sad and what I can certainly imagine as being true story.

God bless and, again, thank you for sharing.

-Bob

Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18
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3 posted 2006-07-10 12:07 PM


Thank you both for your your support of my
work. You can hear me perform some of my poems with music at www.billcrain.net
New CD Memories by Tom Zart.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2006-07-10 05:23 AM


This is so moving.  So true -- you helped us see those who sometimes are so invisible.  Thank you.

aziza

Tom Zart
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5 posted 2006-07-11 12:43 PM


No thank you for time taken and kind reply.
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