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Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18
Posts 682


0 posted 2006-06-23 09:05 PM


SOMEDAY


Life on earth is a dangerous journey
As we walk down survival's road,
Fearing some day that we might suffer.
Lord, we pray you’ll lighten our load.

Our own ignorance keep us happy
For there's so much we're not to know,
Like who shall die, where, when and how
As the storms of our seasons blow.

No hope for human brotherhood
With one world, one race, one rule,
We die from too much knowledge
And the greediness of a fool.

We travel now in outer space,
All continents and seven seas.
As long as we're alive,
We’ll search for memories.

Some day there’ll be a brand new earth
Where the righteous rule, night and day.
No tears, no death, pain nor sorrow
From the world that passed away.

By Tom Zart
Author of
LOVE WAR AND MORE



© Copyright 2006 Tom Zart - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2006-06-26 10:32 PM


Tom,

I thought that your poem was a good reflection on the world's condition with a very nice message of hope at the end.

Enjoyed.

-Bob

Tom Zart
Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682

2 posted 2006-06-27 12:41 PM


Thank you Bob I love that you like my work.
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