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ailei
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since 2006-05-23
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0 posted 2006-05-23 11:52 PM



Take me to your heart,
Ignore me not for I am alive,
With flesh and blood,
Hardships brewed in my life.

Take me to your heart,
Release me from the dark,
For I cannot bear the pain aside,
Tears filled with my eyes,
Light and shine through the night.

Take me to your heart,
Hide me inside,
Let Your peace rest in my side,
For my soul so tired.

Copyright2006 © Elaine Torrefiel Sy

© Copyright 2006 ailei - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
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Sycamore, IL, USA
1 posted 2006-05-24 03:24 PM


A sincere prayer plea from a tired aching heart. Saying your soul is tired in the ending reminds me of the saying "the end of the rope is the beginning of God.

Welcome to the wonderful family of PIP.

   Rae

riet
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since 2006-05-12
Posts 19
Australia
2 posted 2006-05-25 05:08 AM


ailei, I love the words of your poem, they feel like a longing for something very special, deep and complete.

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
3 posted 2006-05-25 07:58 PM


ailei,

I do believe that you can go in Him wherever you desire to go in Him and I do know that we can and do find that perfect perfect peace for the soul that you write about here in your poem. I enjoyed reading your poem very much.

God bless,

-Bob

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4 posted 2006-05-26 09:13 AM


Elaine~
WELCOME to the pages of Passions In Poetry~

This is a gracious word-offering~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2006-05-28 02:58 PM


A heart rending plea.  And I think the important step is the asking.  Love, Joyce
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