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MUSEconnieSEconnie
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0 posted 2006-03-06 05:18 AM


    
FLUTTERBY

ON GOSSAMER WINGS OF VARIED HUES
THE BUTTERFLY PAINTS HER TRAIL
MARKING A PATH TO EVERY BLOOM
SHE LOVES TO SOAR AND SAIL

THE BREEZE DICTATES HER JOURNEY SOME
BUT SHE REALLY DOESN'T CARE
SHOPPING THE BLOSSOMS MAKES HER HUM
WHENEVER SHE TRAVELS THERE

SHE KNOWS NOT OF HER BEAUTY
THE EYE TREAT SHE CAN BE
TO NATURE LOVERS WATCHING
LIKE GOD AND YOU AND ME...


I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS.  MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-03-06 09:11 AM


CONNIE~
THIS IS STUNNINGLY LOVELY ... BOTH THE GORGEOUS PHOTO/GRAPHIC AND YOUR COLORFUL WORDS THAT BROUGHT IT TO LIFE~

*HUGLETS*
~*MARGE*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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sandgrain
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2 posted 2006-03-06 03:43 PM


A beautiful write on a lovely creature.  Your words have more vision than my eyes!  I was astonished to read that you're blind as I came to post my reply.  Honesly, I thought you probably were a butterfly watcher.  Thank you for sharing this.

   Rae

scentsofhope
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Oklahoma, USA
3 posted 2006-03-06 07:46 PM


HI! WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM! I LOVE BUTTERFLIES SO WHEN I SAW YOUR POEM I HAD TO READ IT!! THEY ARE ONE OF GOD"S SMALLEST CREATURES! I LOVE HOW FREE GOD MADE THEM TO JUST FLUTTER FROM FLOWER TO FLOWER! WHEN WATCHING ONE MAKES YOU WANT TO JOIN THEM IN THEIR FREEDOM! THANK YOU AND MAY GOD BLESS YOU! scentsofhope


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4 posted 2006-03-07 12:57 PM


I like the thought that they are totally unaware of their beauty.  Just going about their business as God intended.  Joyce
Musicmaker1969
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5 posted 2006-03-07 09:32 PM


I loved this poem.  It is visually beautiful for a person who has a very hard time seeing.  I'm sorry my writing is small but I am not sure how to make it larger for you.  
My favourite verse was the last, because although she is beautiful beyond expression, she doesn't know it and doesn't flaunt it, yet it blesses many.  Keep up the AWESOME writing.

Sheri Adams

SHE KNOWS NOT OF HER BEAUTY
THE EYE TREAT SHE CAN BE
TO NATURE LOVERS WATCHING
LIKE GOD AND YOU AND ME...

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

MUSEconnieSEconnie
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Posts 74
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6 posted 2006-03-07 10:10 PM


THANK YOU FOR YOUR REPLIES.  I WILL STOP BY TO VISIT YOUR POEMS SOON.  I AM PARTIALLY SIGHTED IN RIGHT EYE.  I USE A VOICE READER SO DON'T WORRY IF YOU DO NOT WISH TO USE CAPS TO ANSWER ME.  IF YOU WOULD LIKE TO READ ANOTHER SPIRITUAL POEM, I HAVE 'TEARS ON A ROSE' IN OPEN POETRY.  IF YOU LIKE IT,
LET ME KNOW AND LEAVE AN E-MAIL ADDRESS AND I WILL SEND YOU THE PRINTABLE JPG POSTER I MADE OF IT.  GOD BLESS YOU ALL FOR YOUR KINDNESS.  YOU GIVE ME A REASON TO GET UP AND CONTINUE TO 'TRY'.

LOVE LIGHT LAUGHTER
MUSEconnieHUES


I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS.  MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES

scentsofhope
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Oklahoma, USA
7 posted 2006-03-22 04:07 PM


HI HAD TO COME BACK TODAY AND READ YOUR POEM AGAIN. AS I WROTE BEFORE I LOVE BUTTERFLIES...TODAY IS GLOOMY OUT... SO NOW I FEEL BETTER...THANKS AGAIN....
PATRICIA


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