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Gospel Kid 1
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0 posted 2006-03-04 06:31 PM



Revelation 22: 1 ~ Then the angel showed me the river of the water of life, as clear as crystal, flowing from the throne of God~

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One night I had a dream I was standing on a
cloud way up high in the air.
I wasn't alone my Lord and Savior was there.

The cloud went higher and higher, we passed the
sun, moon, and stars.
I know we even passed Jupiter and Mars.

At last we stood before the Celestial gate the
doors were opened wide.
I stood there with Jesus by my side.

He took my hand as we walked through the door.
We were in the heavenly city it was beautiful and
I wanted to see more.

We walked down the streets of gold passed the
tree of life.
I knew for me there would be no more sin and strife.

I saw the river of life it was crystal clear.
I saw you and others I knew and there was
no fear.

As we walked we came to a throne on it the
Father sat
I started to fear but Jesus said, Do not fret."

He held out His hands as I heard Him say,
"I brought her here it was for her I died and rose
again, her sin debt I did pay.

I knew I didn't deserve it but Jesus had made the
way, because of Him I heard my Father say,
"She can stay".

When I woke up I knew it was a dream but one day
when He calls me home my song will forever be I have
come home all things are past.
Eternity is here and it will forever last.

But until that time is here my dream will continue
to be, Very, very, real for me.


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2006-03-07 01:06 PM


My dear, you dream big.  Very nice. Joyce
Musicmaker1969
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2 posted 2006-03-07 09:22 PM


Beautiful!  I loved this!  It is a very visual poem and I am a very visual person.  As I read I could see in my mind's eye every thing you were describing.  My favourite stanza was:  
At last we stood before the Celestial gate the
doors were opened wide.
I stood there with Jesus by my side.

Jesus by my side - what a thought to actually be able to see Jesus by my side.  We know He is there now but it is an even greater thought to know that one day we will SEE Him there.  
I also really liked the part where the Father said, "she can stay."  It is a great hope to hold onto until that day actually arrives.  Awesome write.
Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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