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Haikus and Senryus
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Haikus and Senryus |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
the soft breeze at dawn comforts the cold night at last— pain has gone awry. the sun exploded leaving crimson sparks fading… paradise is free. freezing rain falling on death’s creation; will they ever see my bliss? they killed you, my love then they buried you… but our difference saved me. peaks are shining under a sobbing sunrise and only love beams. petals blown away from someone’s grave; time proceeds. petals have souls too. silence pervades here while they linger there, knowing that life is genuine… visualizing energies like warm currents— impermanence’s lie? music is puzzling the spheres are glowing, dauntless like morning’s beauty. few words are enough for those who care most for life… they never forget. Ame et Poésie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ame~ Totally exquisite are these~ 'under a sobbing sunrise' As I emailed you ... I adore this creative thought~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
Thanks Marge! Talking about death totally inspired me, indeed! Ame et Poésie |
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Gospel Kid 1 Junior Member
since 2006-02-28
Posts 30U.S. IN. |
enjoyed your poem and the reality it shared |
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Musicmaker1969
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
This was beautiful. A lovely way to write a poem that I have never seen before. It was visually beautiful. I enjoyed realing it, although because I am used to rhyme it was harder - but that was my problem and not yours lol. A very lovely poem. Sheri Adams Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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