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Michael the 3rd
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since 2006-02-02
Posts 10
Oregon, USA

0 posted 2006-02-02 10:23 PM


"Give It To Me"

Give me your Love

Give me your Strength

Give me your Peace

Give me your Faith

I was once a lonely drifter in the world,

And now i'm a powerful knight of the LORD.

Don't ever leave me, don't ever reject me

I may not be perfect, but you'll never forget me


Poem owned by Mike Boyd (Me)



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sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
1 posted 2006-02-03 12:01 PM


Welcome!  A touching first post.  I like the way you pack all that feeling in few words.  Looking forward to more of your work.

   Rae

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
2 posted 2006-02-04 07:37 PM


Mike that is a beautiful poem and a powerful statement.  I liked it.  

Kim


Michael the 3rd
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since 2006-02-02
Posts 10
Oregon, USA
3 posted 2006-02-05 11:13 PM


Thank you both, i've only started writing, yes I write with few words because I myself find it hard to get through a long poem.  
Musicmaker1969
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4 posted 2006-03-23 05:50 PM


I am so sure that He will grant you all that you have asked for in your poem.  And yes, you are a knight of the King - the King of all kings.  Not even King Arthur and his knights could stand up to Jesus and His Knights.  Way to go - great write.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

Musicmaker1969
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5 posted 2006-04-23 08:26 AM


I did not realize it but I have read this poem once before and commented but for some reason God has brought me back to it and He does nothing out of coincidence (sp).  Yes, you are a Knight of the Lord.  We are all His soldiers and all He sees is the perfection because of the blood of the Lamb.  A very well thought out poem and a very positive one.  Excellent, just as the first time I read it.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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