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shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

0 posted 2006-01-04 10:47 PM

Intro:
First was denial,anger,and depression.
What have I learned in all of life's lesson ?
Goodbye cruel world, you have been nice to know.
Clouds floating above, it's time to let go.

Stage 1:
As dark tunnel spins,my acceptance begins.
Devil heat and fire, do I hear Satans choir ?
Deliver from fate, this doom I would hate.
A big flash of light, took this from my sight.

Stage 2:
Could be a stange wait, at golden gate.
A dream,an illusion,maybe hallucinate.
Life sins and endeavors replayed forever ?
With the flicker of torch, I am on God's porch.

Stage 3:
Relatively flying past, mansion of glory unsurpassed.
Everything a just reward, all at God's own accord.
The warmth of the candle, no more trials to handle.
Now at his right hand, is this what he had planned ?

The End:
In the palm of God's heaven forevermore,
peace at last,
hallelujah,
amen.
paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

[This message has been edited by shades of paul (01-06-2006 08:43 PM).]

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2006-01-05 02:28 PM

It is surely worth the journey. Joyce

shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

2 posted 2006-01-05 05:42 PM

Dear Joyce, thank you for the reply...Paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

3 posted 2006-01-06 02:17 AM

This is soooo beautiful. I have a vivid imagination and I could see in my mind's eye what you were writing. Such a beautiful poem. I pray you keep writing because you have an awesome talent.
Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

4 posted 2006-01-06 07:41 AM

Dear Sheri,thank you very much for your kind comments.....paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

5 posted 2006-01-06 04:37 PM

A very unique perspective on this interesting piece. I really enjoyed it.

Rae

shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

6 posted 2006-01-06 08:39 PM

thank you...Rae.......Take care...paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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