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Xeonox
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0 posted 2005-11-06 06:44 PM



Your life is not yours-
But you think u own it,
Many die tonight,
Not cause they choose to,
But they gave up the fight,

A place to spend your life,
Isn’t that all we want,
To be in peace,
And not think of trouble,
Sorry to burst your bubble,

Will you make it through today?
So, what about tomorrow?
You don’t worry for you don’t know,
Can’t think about the future,
When you stuck in the past,

You need someone to carry you,
When you fall on your face,
No strength to pick yourself up,
But to proud to call for help,
Just look towards me for that hand,

Don’t you cry tonight,
And wish wrong on the others,
For they did what was right,
Why you mad at their choice?
You got to keep a clear sight,

So hang in there,
And don’t hope for a good life,
Get up and pick yourself up,
Make your own path towards heaven,
God is keeping pace with you.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Musicmaker1969
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1 posted 2006-01-02 11:50 PM


A very well thought out poem.  We do need to pick ourselves up after we fall, whether into sin and repent or we fall and are hurt and get the help we need to get back on our feet.  It was well thought out and I liked all the messages you put into it.
Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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