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Necro Draconis
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0 posted 2005-06-25 05:24 AM


This is one of those that stills needs some help

Renewal

The sun rises over the barren plain shining its glistful caress over the land. Suddenly the land begins to moan with anticipation; the stagnant air echoing its cry.The ground begins to break.
An unknown form pushes through reaching out with arms raised high. Searching for shelter against the heat it falls, crying out with a desperate gasp. Instantly the sky fills with the sound of thunder.
Rain pours down saturating the hardened earth. Able to regain its strength it moves on.

We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late.


© Copyright 2005 Ryan Kruse - All Rights Reserved
Musicmaker1969
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1 posted 2005-07-03 11:30 PM


This sounds VERY interesting.  I'd be interested to see more added to it.  It's like waiting for the next book or movie to come out to see what the ending will be.  You've captured my interest.  What's next?

Sheri

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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