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0 posted 2005-06-08 11:59 AM


The early morning moonbow,
Disappeared with the light of day,
Replaced by a sweet smelling sunrise,
A moment made simply to pray.
Dew kissed daisies standing tall,
While lilies seemed bowing their heads,
Faces of pansies looking serene,
As they just awoke from their beds.
Off to the side, near the roses,
I saw You in Your robe of soft white,
The bud You held slowly unfurled,
Bathed in the glow of Your light.
The ducks still asleep at the edge of the pond,
Little heads tucked under their wings,
Began their day with a radiant dance,
As they heard Your sweet angels sing.
You met me at the violets,
Still wearing their veil of dew,
Took my hand and as we knelt,
I was blessed by the grace of You.

[This message has been edited by BSC (08-15-2006 11:06 AM).]

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1 posted 2005-06-08 02:16 PM


Bonnie~
It is SO nice to see you dear lady~
It simply makes my day to see our PiP 'oldies' come 'home'~

And to *gift* us with a beauty such as this makes it extraspecially nice~

Hope you are well and that those who love you and those you love are doing fine~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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2 posted 2005-06-08 09:10 PM


What a happy, dancy, flowery piece.  I could feel the mornings dewy freshness as I read it.  It's beautiful.

Thank you,

  Rae

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3 posted 2005-06-08 10:36 PM


Beautiful!
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4 posted 2005-06-15 10:30 AM


This is stunningly appealing to the senses.  Love, Joyce
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5 posted 2006-01-02 03:13 AM


Dear Bonnie
sweet poem, so visual and simply devine...loved it  

winged ~hugs~ floating your way

Tracie


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It is the harmony of the universe


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (01-04-2006 05:54 AM).]

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6 posted 2006-01-06 02:06 AM


WOW!!!  I loved this poem!  It is so visual.  I could see it as I read it!!!  And you know, my mother would love it just because of how it relates to gardens and the beauty of flowers.  What a beautiful expression of God's love to take you to such a beautiful place and then take your hand in love and tenderness.  Just beautiful!!!!!
Sheri Adams

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