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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-01-13 09:07 PM



-The fight-

Sometimes I bow my head and I cry
Knowing I only add to your pain
But I swear I fight it and I try
To walk along with you in the rain

-Juju

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Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2005-01-14 07:35 PM



I was told as a child that the rain was God's tears and I like how you write of the rain in your poem because I do beleive that we are so loved by him that when we cry from pain that he cries right along beside us. Good job. -Bob

saved_by_grace
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In the arms of God...
2 posted 2005-01-15 12:21 PM


Great thought, Juju!     And very well said, Bob!  Love both the thoughts that you two expressed...

God bless...Becka

Juju
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In your dreams
3 posted 2005-01-18 01:17 PM


Thank you guys!

JUju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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