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Xeonox
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0 posted 2004-12-28 11:13 PM



I look at the stars,
And see your face,
Thousands of eyes,
And millions of ways,

You reach beyond,
What I cannot understand,
Your love is something,
I cannot replicate,

Patience is what you provide,
In billions you reside,
Show me the way,
Not to heaven or hell,

But to help myself,
And others realize
Your are the beginning,
And the end,

Free me from all desire,
But only yours,
Teach me the sayings,
Many of us have lost,

Feel me with love,
Overflowing my soul,
Give me some guidance,
Be my ultimate goal,

Oh great one, I seek you,
To show me the way,
That is righteous today,

I am ready, now,
At this instance,
To let go of my lust,
Greed and affection,

I will preach your sayings,
But first you must teach me,
The lessons of life,
How to live it well,
And free of care,

You hear me tonight,
As you do every night,
I am in your debt,
For now evermore.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2004 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2004-12-30 12:17 PM


I felt that this was some beautiful heart inspired prayer and supplication for greater understanding and knowledge. I think it's wonderful how you see Jesus in so many many different aspects of your life and how you desire His lead in more practical ways than simply heaven or hell. Again, very beautiful, inspiring, and straight from the heart writing here. Thank you for sharing and God bless. -Bob
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2 posted 2004-12-30 01:17 PM


This was not about Jesus but God in general. Thanks for your comment though.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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3 posted 2004-12-30 02:28 PM



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4 posted 2004-12-30 06:23 PM



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