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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2004-04-27 11:07 AM



When white petals
take flight
on the wind's sprint

and April supercedes
her great promise

and wildflowers
jump the fences
that confine them,

in absentia
my spirit
will renew itself

shedding earth's
chrysalis round
my wings
for this moment



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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-04-27 11:47 AM


~Beautiful and very uplifting Michele~

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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Washington State
2 posted 2004-04-27 02:06 PM


Well said and lovely.  Joyce
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2004-04-27 04:24 PM


So soft, so beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Beasley
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since 2003-11-28
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Cheboygan,MI USA
4 posted 2004-05-06 07:47 AM


Beautiful poem!
Barb

EliJah
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 8

5 posted 2004-05-07 11:15 AM


uplifting and encouraging
great work

True North
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since 2004-05-03
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6 posted 2004-05-07 07:49 PM


hello inkedgoddess...
               i may not have embraced the entire meaning behind your words.. but surely did i feel the warmuth within.

          

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
7 posted 2006-01-22 01:06 AM


Michele, this is a KEEPER!  Absolutely beautiful phrasing and meaningful.   ...jo
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
8 posted 2006-01-22 10:55 AM


Oh how had I even missed this first time around.

It is lovely.

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2006-01-22 11:40 AM


InkyOne~
Absolutely  B E A U T I F U L  !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
10 posted 2006-02-04 10:18 PM


Enchanting.  This one flows so well and gives a feeling of freeness to the spirit.

                               Kim


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