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ChemicalRepose
Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102


0 posted 2004-03-29 11:54 PM


Chose my path

with great care

we don't mind

we won't dare

to think to

question you

only bear to live

up to you
Your standards

are our quest

in this life

to feel at rest

with great needs

you show us

that we need to

obey you
God

won't you hear

my eulogy

and see I'm weary

and let me feel worthy
This is all

not what it seems

like a fool

you've betrayed me

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GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2004-10-27 03:24 AM


Ohh these words are pained...
I know I've felt betrayed by him before.
I never was...
but I still have a hard time figuring out how it works.
I'm sorry it feels so much this way, though.
I hope have a chance to see the softer side of his grace and blessing soon. I know I'd like to, also.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

2 posted 2004-11-06 10:50 AM



arthur
Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
3 posted 2004-11-12 04:14 PM


i have thought as this
arthur

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
4 posted 2004-11-13 12:37 PM


I have found that it's not at all about standards but all about love why he changes my path at times... That truly is the hardest thing to accept, I think.... It's hardest to accept that he truly does love me in spite of all my sub-standardness. Smiles. Good job.

-Bob

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