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Poet4Christ
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since 2003-02-19
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Oklahoma City

0 posted 2004-03-22 12:25 PM


Growing Discoveries

Once in life
my inflicted soul
was so graciously embraced
with an exquisite taste of you
A longing to indulge
the plague of inherent empty holes inside
blossomed as the unexpected springtime color
became a song and grew

As I grew
you grew upon
my barren stumbling walk
and we confronted the forgetfulness of truths
A consuming desire to embrace
your blessed touch and breath of love
cleansed as the much anticipated rain
became a flood and followed through

Through the pain
I finally followed through
neglected narrow trails
and fell forward into the most beautiful of seasons
A studious pursuit to bathe
within the goodness of your hands
encouraged me to scan the vastness of the skies
became my heart and gave me reason

reason to discover you


Timothy Work 2004

He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26

© Copyright 2004 Timothy Work - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2004-03-22 04:16 AM


This is very well written! Thanks for posting it.

Betty Lou Hebert

Star T
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2 posted 2004-03-22 08:15 AM


"and we confronted the forgetfulness of truths" i love that line.its a great poem!
another line i liked is "neglected narrow trails and fell forward into the most beautiful of seasons" thats so wonderful! pls do stay in that beautiful season...

Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved.

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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2004-03-22 10:33 AM


Happy to read your work again, Tim.  Very inspired.  Love, Joyce
Margherita
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4 posted 2004-03-22 04:34 PM


"within the goodness of your hands"

... you feel safe and bloom.

Beautiful reconnection.
Love, Margherita

Poet4Christ
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 211
Oklahoma City
5 posted 2004-03-22 09:07 PM


Thank you all for your responses depite the fact that I have neglected my friends here at Passions.  I will try to be around more.  I am glad you guys liked it.  It is not one of my favortie peices, but I wanted to get some feedback on it, so thank you and God bless you - Tim

He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26

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