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Beasley
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since 2003-11-28
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Cheboygan,MI USA

0 posted 2004-03-18 08:49 AM



The Devil’s Workshop

Worrisome brooders
lose ther days
To the tune of the devil
And his lackluster ways.

Gossip lays cozy
Nurtured by time;
An idle and lazy
Ladder to climb.

Once at the top
They all tend to crumble
And fall to the floor
With an attitude, humble.

They reach out their hand
To God they implore
And pray for His mercy
Like never before.

Where are the talents
They harbored within?
They’re showcased in danger
And polished in sin.

Barb Gedman

© Copyright 2004 Barbara Gedman - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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1 posted 2004-03-18 05:03 PM


Very true.

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
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2 posted 2004-03-18 10:26 PM


Dear Barb;  This is cleverly written and presented.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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3 posted 2004-03-21 02:14 PM


Great poem, Barb!
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