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The Pledge
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The Pledge |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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The Pledge In Judah there was such a drought, Some people started moving out. Elimelech, his wife and sons, Were part of the nomadic ones. Naomi was a woman who Was virtuous and faithful too. In Moab, then, they went to dwell, But there great sorrow soon befell. Her husband died and yet she stayed. Her sons each wed a Moab maid. Orpah was one, Ruth the other. Naomi was their loving mother. Fate dealt another hurtful blow. She lost her sons and didn't know What she should do, but soon a plan To journey home, where lived a man Who to her husband was a kin, Began to grow and settle in. Her daughters, she told to go back To their old homes, not from a lack Of tender feelings, but she knew They needed family ties too. Then Orpah left but Ruth knew she Must beg Naomi fervently To not be banished from her side And pledged she'd be a faithful guide, In all the days that they would live And only love and honor give. Naomi's God and people too Ruth would serve her whole life through. Naomi clasped her close and they Continued bravely on their way! To be continued in "The Promise" Betty Lou Hebert |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A compelling biblical story told in poetry. Excellent work! Grover. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Grover; Thanks for commenting. I will post the other half of the story tomorrow. It's called "The Promise". Hope you will read it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Yay! Oh Betty, I'm so happy you're bringing this passage back to light in your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, families who read this can teach their children a lot of these stories we cherish dear from the Good Book, God Bless You, I can't wait for the conclusion tomorrow, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Trillium What a Blessing you are. You speak God's Word through verse. You are God's messenger and His beacon of light to show His way to all. Love Isobel. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: Thank you so much for your kind words. I have always loved the story of Ruth and Naomi and my daughter is named Ruth. I will post the finale in a little while. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Isobel: Thank you for your sweet comments. I really enjoy telling some of the old Bible stories in poetry. I have always said "God guides my pen" and I truly believe He does. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
You are marvelous. You are marvelous. You are marvelous. anonymous xoxoxoxxo |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear anonymous! I have a feeling I might know who you are! Thanks for those "marvelous" comments. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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