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Cloud Brother Brown Feather
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Cloud Brother Brown Feather |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Cloud Brother Brown Feather Across the golden stretch of feathered seas the clockwork pass bears return to rest Within the wandering haze of asphalt trees a mind adrift falls behind the steering time O solitary friend so charmed and blessed a sight amiss finds you perched upon a sending line O Cloud Brother grant the day a vision of your flight for your touch of wonder floats within the windy sway Your sturdy humble essence brings harvest to repairing light and a treasured sense of common air within our souls You complacently observe as your golden waves dissolve away so that our clockwork restless stories might be told With your steely gaze and ruffled breast O Brown Feather grant the day a vision of your wings A fated chance upon you away from your nest is pleasant charity for exhausted bothered eyes Your nature’s spirit charms bestow securing things so trace your winding gliding circles that fall atop the sky Timothy Work He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 [This message has been edited by Poet4Christ (01-19-2004 03:42 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Timothy~ This is, without doubt, one of the most beautiful things I'll get the opportunity to read this day~ Oh my ... you've written it so tenderly and vividly ... I was there~ Thank you for this vision of feathered grace~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is truly lovely, Timothy...a wonderful poem to start my day with uplifting. Thank you! |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
The emotional imagery is of quality sharpness. I applaud an awesome work of poetic art! Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This puts me in tune with the natural and spiritual world! It's wonderful and I will think about it all day long. Betty Lou Hebert |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Timothy, this was a song of beauty. Really, really lovely, really, really! |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is beautiful. Betty |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Wow - I really wasn't expecting such a great response from this poem - Thank you so much all of you. I have almost always just wrote about emotion and the things that go on inside us, but lately combining that with the elegant beauty of nature has helped me produce some works that I have truly enjoyed writing. This poems means a lot to me because when my wife(who is Native American) and I started dating she informed me that in her tribe it was good luck to see a hawk. She liked the way I was always pointing them out soaring around here in Oklahoma. Ever since then my combined love of them and her input has helped me develop a great love for the species. I think that I will write much more about the things of nature I enjoy so much. Sorry for the long response to your responses.. lol God bless you all - Tim He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 [This message has been edited by Poet4Christ (01-19-2004 03:41 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Hi Tim. This is lovely. Your poetry is getting better all the time. Love, joyce |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved this Tim. Up here it is also good luck to the First Nations to see a hawk, and the combination the ancient's spiritualism with the modern is a beauiful blending indeed. I bet she loved this poem, seems we did here. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Timothy, this is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, my Native American Indians would absolutely love this as it holds true to the essence of the flight of the Holy Spirit! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Timothy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Timothy, this was a gorgeous poem. Happy Birthday, by the way! |
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