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wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
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Okaloosa Island, FL

0 posted 2004-01-02 12:17 PM



Winter sheet on the deck,
the hardwood creaks and
even it seems happy as I
walk out of a deep freeze.
One beautiful pearl eye-
looked me over good tonight.

Thank you God,
para la luna.

And the cold air, and the
winter skyline, blinking.
I think we have the
moon all wrong; could
feel it laughing, putting
something back in my heart.

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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2004-01-02 01:51 PM


wintertao:  Very beautiful images of full moon on the snow. Truly a gift from God!

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2004-01-02 01:56 PM


This is exhilaratingly lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2004-01-28 11:34 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is a most beautiful blessing and thank you to Him who created beautiful Lady Luna, yay, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2004-02-01 08:55 AM


Ahh luna's brilliance!
Sooo lovely.
Love, Margherita

Grover
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London, ON, Canada
5 posted 2004-02-01 04:31 PM


Good imagery! Grover.
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