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Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15
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0 posted 2003-11-19 03:16 PM



A little Jesus feels
about right in the
City Hall Square,

Marking my
soul's ascendence
into the Kingdom

as I walk, A man
aching in the sunlight
of Spanish voices.

I wonder if
Jesus stands close
as He folds

His blood thickened
thorns, annointing
my path, marking

X's for the sinners,
singing for the angels,
believing in God's beneficence?

Is the trust we
have gilt of the agonizing
lather of his pain

that we pray?

A little Jesus feels
about right as I turn
this corner of my life.

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-11-19 03:28 PM


I like your thoughts and your poetry.  Love, Joyce
Sparticus
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2 posted 2003-11-19 03:36 PM


Thank you kindly, Joyce.


Sparticus

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-11-19 04:20 PM


I like this...your pivotal point. Very nice to read. He is wonderful!
Love,
Terri~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-11-19 11:56 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, He sacrificed Himself to save us all and the red he wears repesents the suffering with the blue proving his terrestrial existance as well! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, you write with pure heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jesse, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15
Posts 245

5 posted 2003-11-20 01:25 PM


Thank you both very much.  I am happy to meet such wonderful individuals that are here.

You make my day!


Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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