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earthdust
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since 2003-10-28
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predestined and foreknown

0 posted 2003-10-28 09:49 PM


As I try to walk on my own
My knees just dont feel so sure
How do I do this?

Tembling in fear and awe
Everything seems so strange
I reach for You.

You're my mother, and my father
You're all that I know
I'm a babe again.

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1 posted 2003-10-29 05:26 AM


Well now welcome to the family of Passions in Poetry and a very nice entrance poem you presented indeed.  Please check your email for a special welcome and note from us all here.  Enjoy!

Try to make time to listen to
someone who talks with their heart.

Carpe' Diem

whispering wind
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since 2003-08-18
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2 posted 2003-10-29 05:05 PM


Wonderful first post. I cant wait to read more of your work. I almost forgot WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!
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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2003-10-30 06:04 PM


earthdust:  Nice to see you posting here and I hope you will enjoy being a part of this site!  We will enjoy your poetry!

Betty Lou Hebert

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Lost in thought
4 posted 2003-10-30 10:59 PM


earthdust,
excellent post!

faith like a child takes alot of humility. You express that here. Love it!
And, welcome to the Blue Pages

Always God's Girl, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 257
India
5 posted 2003-10-31 07:47 AM


HE is always for help
  just call out
         beautiful

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-11-01 12:52 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is a beautifully uplifting debut, sweet friend, with Him we are forever young and are forever born, yay, God Bless You, this made my heart smile! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your gorgeous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2003-11-01 05:02 PM



Welcome to Passions!  Thank you for sharing your Senryu...and we're looking forward to more.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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