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whispering wind
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since 2003-08-18
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0 posted 2003-10-26 07:23 PM



The clouds entwine heavens gate,
the golden wings of angels dust hits God’s estate.
The feathers rise, the wind begins,
the tears, the cries, the storm of sin.
The lightening bolt, the thunder roar.
The angels fly as the rain begins to pour.
They lift their heads above the sky.
Rampaging around as they cry!
The tempest thrashes a mist the gate.
Hold back Satan! Hold back hate!
The angels thrust there mighty steed
forward march until they bleed.!!
The mist arise, the clouds of sin,
Satan hold back you can not win.
The twister emerges above the sky.
Angels now!! Fight!! FLY!!
The volcano erupts the intensity within.
Angels now defeat the sin.
Hold back Satan hold back hate.
We can not allow them through thy gate.
Armies arise the sound of fear.
Satan beware for angels are here.
The swords clash, the thunder roars,
the spears thrown, the lightening sores.
The clouds blacken, the sea of doom,
who will live to see the sun loom?
The devil is thrown upon the sea.
The tide explodes and engulfs his body.
The clouds of light shine again,
and the angels sing praise for their win.
The thickened clouds depart the sky.
The rain evolves and a rainbow emerges upon high.
The angels wings spread once more
and the fairy dust hits the floor.
The golden gate of love on high,
shall rake forever, and maintain peace amongst the sky.
The clouds entwine heavens gate,
And the angels once more protect God’s estate.

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SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-10-27 04:58 AM


Beautiful! Another battle won of good, and evil...God triumphs again!!!!
Love,
Terri~

Poet4Christ
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 211
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2 posted 2003-10-27 08:22 AM


WOW! - It is refreshing to read a great Spiritual poem with a little intensity.  I loved this poem.  The imagery took me away from my little computer way up in the sky where battles are being waged.. Incredible and descriptive, I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into this one, but that you also feel very passionate about this subject as do I.  Angels NEVER get the recognition they deserve from any denomination.  Beautiful
Thank you so much and God bless you - Tim

He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26

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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2003-10-27 03:33 PM


Very imaginative and effective.  Joyce
mysticpoe
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4 posted 2003-10-28 08:45 AM


Real nice write, enjoyed a lot.

poe

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then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

earthdust
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5 posted 2003-10-29 05:39 PM


i really enjoyed the vivid imagery in this poem. it was great! thanks for sharing!
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6 posted 2003-10-30 11:51 AM


This was exciting to read!  Very vivid images!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2003-10-30 11:54 AM


Now that was excellent, will have to go find more of your work!  Great imagery and story as well.

Try to make time to listen to
someone who talks from their heart.

Carpe' Diem

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8 posted 2003-11-01 12:33 PM






(smiles) Yay! Ha ha, bad guys! (giggles) ay the angels always guide all our children and teach them the gifts of love and righteousness, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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