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baseballpoet
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0 posted 2003-10-20 02:02 PM


In a place far away, that's where my sights will be.
Where I won't look to men to find the value of me.
A place my voice will always sing,
my ears will hear, and my eyes will always see.
Somewhere I won't worry about what the world will bring.

In a place far away, that's where my heart will rest,
and find a new home in the palm of His hand, beating in His chest.
A place where forgiveness falls as soon as I confess.
A place that knows no boundries in the north, south, east, or west.
Somewhere I won't have to worry about what happens next.

In a place far away, that's where my life begins,
where remembered is my testimony and forgotten are my sins.
A place where angels fear to trod is where my soul will live.
A place where time doesn't exist is the gift I've been given,
Somewhere I won't worry at all, because I will be in heaven.

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1 posted 2003-10-20 06:52 PM


Nice poem and we all look forward to being in that place!

Betty Lou Hebert

River
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2 posted 2003-10-20 10:48 PM


I dream of this place as well...sometimes for hours at a time. nice job =) hope to see more of your work.

                - River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-10-20 11:22 PM


Very, very nice! Much enjoyed!
Love,
Terri~

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4 posted 2003-10-21 05:00 PM




(smiles) I believe we all dream of this place with all our hearts, with golden streets and a kingdom over the clouds and angels walking all upon them, with the Lord reigning in His throne! (smiles) Know you are destined to find this special place as you continue to shine in the light, swet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Mary Ann
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5 posted 2003-10-26 07:30 AM


Very uplifting! A beautiful poem...thank you for the lovely read

God bless,
~MA~

2dalimit
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6 posted 2003-10-26 08:53 AM


In a place far away...I won't have to worry...

Enjoyed the read,   Melton

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7 posted 2003-10-26 11:31 AM


Nicely done.  Joyce
whispering wind
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8 posted 2003-10-29 06:49 PM


WHOOOO. I liked this poem a lot. It is absolutely amazing to see the different perspectives of heaven. Thank you so much for reminding me of that pleasures heaven will bring.
Justbleu
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9 posted 2003-11-13 07:36 PM


Uplifting and inspiring poem.....

I do so long for that place too!!!!
Lovely writing dear poet!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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