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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2003-08-30 10:16 PM




Prayer
By: Noah Eaton
4/17/03

Children duck in the shadows
Dissolve into the colors like a reverie gone astray
Feels like the moon is hidden deep in the thief’s back pocket
Trying to fit in the body of a promise I could partake

So souls of men, why will ye scatter?
Lying beside each other in your graves
Rinse these glasses for the believers
So we can drink in comfort…

In my place I’ve seen Siloam’s shady rill
Saw the Rose of Sharon weep in attestation
Couldn’t tell if it was His voice speaking to all the lambs
Saw white prisms dance in their own intercession

So souls of men, why will ye scatter?
Lying beside each other in your graves
Rinse these glasses for the believers
So we can drink in comfort…

I see Mary standing out there in the garden
Hoping perhaps they can be another bountiful immaculation
I see her wear a blue mask half the day away
Seems what you believe and what you see is put in moderation

Come on down to me
I’ve got to ask for your blessing
Because I’ve came here with a load
I see a wideness in your mercy
Rinse these glasses for the believers
So we can drink in comfort…

Come all angels, ever singing with grace
Awake my beating heart to the rhythm of the sun
Sing my song backwards
Lend me the ears to listen and let me come
Come all angels, embrace your Brothers
Crown Him with more crowns
As I sit in this chapel, I shall reflect on all I’m blessed
And upon all that I’ve wronged and all I regret…

If I could only tell you what I see…
Tell me what you see…

What you see,
what you see,
what you see
What you see is a blinding light…

What you see,
what you see,
what you see
What you see is a warning sign…

What you see,
WHAT YOU SEE,
WHAT YOU SEE
Temporarily blinds…


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And I hold this lamp, asking for your light
I see your pale eyes bleeding
I realize there’s no east, no west, no onieromancy
Joyful, I find myself embrace Thee

Shall we gather at the river now?
O come, all you faithful siblings
Rinse these glasses for the believers
So we can drink in comfort…

So I come, the Great Redeemer cries
In blessed assurance, Jesus is mine
So I come, the Great Redeemer cries
In blessed assurance, Jesus is mine…
So I come, the Great Redeemer cries
In blessed assurance, Jesus is mine
So I come, the Great Redeemer cries
In blessed assurance, Jesus is mine…






I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-30-2003 10:17 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-08-30 11:57 PM


WOW.....WOW.....WOW! Noah why haven't you been making millions yet? Or have you? If you already have a book would you pass along the name of it, and where I could find one. Amazing in epic proportions!!! VERY nice!!!! This should be a song sang in churches! Lovely! Lovely, as always! But then God the Father is worthy of ALL our praises when I think of the things He's delivered us from, and the things He freely gives!
Just beautiful..

SharaRose @-->--

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2 posted 2003-08-31 09:46 AM


I've been missing you Noah.  You are moving on so fast in your talent.  This is wonderful.  I will have to come back to it again.  Love, Joyce
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3 posted 2003-08-31 06:57 PM


NOAH!!!!!!!!!! i've missed you dear friend!! great write hun.
robin

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cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

Paul Wilson
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4 posted 2003-09-02 02:40 AM


Noah...Truly a masterpiece. I am in awe of your talent. thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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