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TS86_2005
New Member

since 2003-08-29

Posts 1

0 posted 2003-08-29 08:34 PM

I've never written any poetry before just sort of came out this afternoon.

With harsh rain beating on my skin,
I begin to turn and leave,
it seems the cold will win.

But I stand on a rock in the light,
still warm from the long day past
that I have missed in night.

That rigid freeze finally leaves me,
a better spirit flows through,
And now, with faith, I see,

I can be born anew.

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2003-08-29 08:40 PM

Yes, we can all be born anew m'friend!

What a wonderful first post!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-08-29 08:49 PM

Welcome to Passions! And I'm so pleased you chose to post in Spiritual Journeys for your first post.

I enjoyed your take on spiritual nourishment, m'friend. I look forward to reading many more from you.

Please check your e mail for a special greeting, courtesy of Passions.

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-08-30 01:25 AM

Very nice feeling I was left with after reading this. Lovely!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2003-08-30 04:02 AM

Well now, welcome and if that "just popped out" then I am really going enjoy reading your spontaneous poetry. This was very spiritual and cleansing, very nice indeed.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-08-30 09:43 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, dearest friend, I am so happy you tried writing and out came this most gorgeous gem, sweet friend, this is a very uplifting debut, believe me, you have talent and I would love to read much more from your golden heart! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your spiritual poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2003-08-31 11:51 PM

Good start. Hope to see more. Joyce

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