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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-08-29 02:50 AM


sighing in a long, long, line...
grateful now for lack of flesh.
All of us are side by side
we are simple lines of mesh--

A net--connects--
but cut one strand--
There, by us, complexity.
The net--dissects,
from spare of hand--
where fingers would be
better spent--
with a deft heart knitting this--

tell me that I heard it wrong?

I thought it was for all of us--
that no one stood alone in song--
as long as there was one of us,
there--we knew where we belonged...

"Here."  I break the Sabbath--keep.
A shepherd will attend his sheep--

exampled by the Christ.

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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2003-08-29 03:05 AM


WOW! Picking jaw up off the floor.

Fantastic Karen  


fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (08-29-2003 03:05 AM).]

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2003-08-29 03:40 AM



Karen... ...this is your heart and it is beautiful.

And...?

"tell me that I heard it wrong?

I thought it was for all of us--
that no one stood alone in song--
as long as there was one of us,
there--we knew where we belonged..."


No...you didn't hear it wrong...smile

Love you, lady.

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-29-2003 03:51 AM).]

timothysangel1973
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3 posted 2003-08-29 08:35 PM


Very deep write Karen!

I really enjoyed this one.

Tima

brian sites
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4 posted 2003-08-30 02:06 AM


no..you didnt hear it wrong

sing love
sing peace
sing understanding
sing forgiveness

example indeed

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5 posted 2003-08-30 04:07 AM


No baby, I 'aint saying you heard it wrong.

tell me that I heard it wrong?

I thought it was for all of us--
that no one stood alone in song--
as long as there was one of us,
there--we knew where we belonged...


And they will learn by example.  Teach on!


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Trillium
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6 posted 2003-08-30 06:59 PM


This is a terrific write!  

Betty Lou Hebert

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2003-08-30 08:43 PM


Thank you all very much.

I appreciate so much the warm welcome here in Spiritual.

I was told I might not be well received, being of a different faith than the majority here, and you all have proved the doubters wrong.

I humbly thank you for all for giving me a chance.

Love reigns.

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-08-30 09:19 PM




(smiles) Oh Karen, it doesn't matter what faith every one of us are, sweet friend, for this is the Spiritual forum and the praising of all beliefs is welcome here! (kiss on cheek) May we all set an example and attend to our jobs as shepherds of our own, purifying our coats with cleansing and the teachings of love! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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