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O' Maker Of Life - I Await The Tide

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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 07-31-2003 01:34 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal


I Await The Tide
~*Marge Tindal*~


O' Maker Of Life
into this earthly shell I am bound
until I am washed upon your shore
awaiting passage
forevermore at peace
among the oceans of my people

Having floated many moon-moved waves
I now await the tide that will bring me
into the serenity of your gentle waters
Whenever you are ready
I will come home to you

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Outstanding imagery and you kept it together so well.

Love,
LayItDown
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2 posted 07-31-2003 03:12 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Beautfiully penned Marge..and will be treasured by many.
Into my library with his keeper.
~Heart hugs~
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3 posted 07-31-2003 04:25 PM       View Profile for Patricia   Email Patricia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patricia

Oh Marge...just lovely.  Keep 'em comin', lady!

Patricia
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4 posted 07-31-2003 05:04 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Dear Marge:  I remember this one and it's even more meaningful than the first time I read it.  It answers a need in me!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 08-01-2003 09:55 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

this is so beautiful Marge very peaceful...
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6 posted 08-04-2003 07:41 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

What a graceful way of putting the journey from this life to the next. It reminds me of how someone else viewed death.. as a ship leaving one shore to the crys "There she goes", but appearing on another shore to cries of "Here she comes"! Beautiful, my friend.

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

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very powerful, evocative & succinct.

well done, i enjoyed this very much.
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8 posted 08-05-2003 09:13 AM       View Profile for 2dalimit   Email 2dalimit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2dalimit

Enjoyed the peacefulness:
Whenever you are ready
I will come home to you


Thanks,
Melton
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A picture of serenity..  ready to go in
God's timing.  
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a pure and serene poem
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A precious prayer poem.  Joyce
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Brilliantly penned.
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13 posted 08-15-2003 07:12 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Thank you all so very much~
I felt the need to post this one again ... it was somewhere in the archives and need to be sung once more time~

Thank you for letting me sing it for you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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14 posted 01-20-2006 03:35 PM       View Profile for jody5   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jody5

This poem caught me. It's exactly how I feel and so well written.
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15 posted 10-08-2015 09:32 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Heavenly thoughts...James
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