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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2003-07-26 12:40 PM


Ungrateful Child

If my child came to me in need,
With confidence that I would heed
His plea, responding right away
Giving my help without delay.

If then he took my gift and left
Would I not feel a bit bereft;
If he gave no more thought to me
Until one more emergency?

Is that not how I treat my Lord,
Taking Him at His loving word,
Beseeching when the need is there;
Forgetting Him when times are fair?

Dear Lord, I come with hat in hand,
To let You know I understand
That You are there through thick or thin,
Whether I lose of if I win.

So now, right now, upon my knee
I'm thanking You for helping me
Through sorrows and admitting too
The days I have forgotten You.

I long to be the grateful one
Acknowledging all You have done.

By: Joyce 7/26/03

© Copyright 2003 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-07-26 03:40 PM


Don't we all need to do this more often. Not the 911 christian, when in need, but grateful for all he does at *all* times. I need to do better at this than I have been doing that is for sure. The cares of the world, and the day, and cares of the heart tend to make me lose my way at times. Thanks for sharing this, and putting it to words!!!!! He is worthy of far more. As I read this I drew closer to Him. Thank you for that!!!

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2 posted 2003-07-27 12:01 PM


Joyce:  A beautiful poem and we'd all do well to follow your advice!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2003-07-27 08:21 PM


Joyce~
Oh my ... the 'truth' in this write !!!

I do try to make the time to THANK HIM more often than I ASK HIM ...~

A lovely, lovely *gifted* write~
If my pastor saw it ... he'd probably put it on the Sunday church bulletin.
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2003-07-27 09:06 PM


So now, right now, upon my knee
I'm thanking You for helping me
Through sorrows and admitting too
The days I have forgotten You.

I long to be the grateful one
Acknowledging all You have done.


Joyce, I think we all do lots of asking and not enough thanking. Your poem is wonderful and a reminder to be in the presence of our Lord and praise and thank Him.

And I thank you for writing this.
Hugs of gratitude for the reminder.

LayItDown
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5 posted 2003-07-28 09:04 PM


Beautiful, Joyce.

Love,
Jack

mysticpoe
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6 posted 2003-07-29 08:28 AM


Hi Joyce, again timeless wisdom.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

MonrchssKris
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7 posted 2003-07-29 05:16 PM


I absolutely LOVE this poem!! It perfectly describes how I feel about myself at times and sometimes about other's attitudes.  Thank you for writing this awesome poem!!

Love is patient; love is kind.
Love is not envious or boastful
or arrogant or rude.
It does not insist on its own way:
it is not irritable or re

Joyce Johnson
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8 posted 2003-07-29 09:28 PM


thanks to all of you dear friends and welcome MonrchssKris to our corner.  Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (07-29-2003 09:30 PM).]

2dalimit
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9 posted 2003-07-30 08:00 AM


Humbling.

Thanks,
Melton

SPIRIT
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10 posted 2003-08-15 11:17 PM


Much truth in these lovely words - thank you.
Xelorz
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11 posted 2003-08-16 10:07 PM


Sadly too true.

~Xelorz

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12 posted 2003-09-17 11:46 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I truly believe we all can do better, as I too think I question too much and should simply just thank and trust He is doing the right thing always as He has His plan! (sigh) May we learn to be as thankful as can be, sweet friend, this is very heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joyce, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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