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mysticpoe
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0 posted 2003-07-11 04:28 PM


Into the mystic
that eye's foresee
by and besides
the glory to be
who enters, are we blind
forever passes
then the sigh
so eternal
of what went by.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (07-11-2003 07:10 PM).]

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LoveBug
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1 posted 2003-07-12 10:30 AM


A very nice piece... it has a sad aura about it, but isn't that what poetry is: emotion?

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-07-12 12:59 PM


... of what went by ... yes. Some melancholic moments, but then there will be sighs of what still has to come ...
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

mysticpoe
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3 posted 2003-07-12 01:10 PM


Thank you LoveBug, I like that name. For all of your support  and time that you put into this for me. Thanks again.

mysticpoe


Margharita, Thank you so much for your kind comments. I'm glad that you enyoyed.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-09-16 11:10 PM




(sigh) When so much seems so far away, in the blink of an eye it can be so much closer than we think, we just have to keep our eyes open! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is spiritually lifting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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