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MysticDreamer
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0 posted 2003-07-07 06:11 PM


Spirit, their tree of life
that connects everything forever
The mountains, rivers, caves and seas
drawing animals and people together

The Sacred land that we walk on
owned by earth herself
Could only tell their tale
of the beauty found within

And the Great Spirit
that flows within us all
Calls us to this river
Their lifeblood lives again

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mysticpoe
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1 posted 2003-07-08 02:31 PM


Very nice, the spirit like a tree, which all comes from. Only the branches and then the fruit make individuals, as they find their own directions. I got a lot from this. Nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Musicmaker1969
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2 posted 2003-07-13 11:29 PM


A very lovely poem.  Very alive indeed.

Jesus lives in my heart!
Sheri Liegh Welna
(formerly Sheri Liegh Adams)
sheriliegh@reddens.ca

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2003-07-16 04:11 PM


Lovely thoughts here.  Love, Joyce
JaiOfHeaven
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4 posted 2003-07-16 06:43 PM


Very lovely thoughts...
MysticDreamer
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5 posted 2003-07-17 03:41 AM


thank you mysticpoe
Musicmaker1969
Joyce
JaiOfHeaven

I truly believe this is my calling

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-09-06 08:02 PM




(smiles) This is most beautiful, sweet friend, I love the spiritual, meditative feel of this ode! (big hugggsssssss) Every river is a vein of Mother Nature, so may her veins be filled with fresh air and music, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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