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MysticDreamer
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since 2003-04-21
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0 posted 2003-06-19 03:39 AM


Common Ground

Invisible walls surround us
Created by our fears
Held in place by ignorance
Towering over our years

Parts of humanity concealed
In their isolation
Without the understanding
There is no separation

Invisible threads support us
Linked by faith in love
Sending us healing currents
In complete acceptance

All the miracles of nature
Returning to center stage
With a wisdom beyond words
And a innocence beyond age

We can break through any barrier
Even though
We're worlds apart

We stand on common ground
When love speaks
The language of the heart



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D'sWhisper
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since 2003-06-16
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1 posted 2003-06-19 05:46 AM


:::Claps::: Wonderful!! Colorful ribbons streaming from every line guided my thoughts to all the right places. Common ground...what a wonderful place of relations and compromise to be. I liked this a lot. ~DW~
mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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2 posted 2003-06-19 12:01 PM


Linked by faith in love. Outstanding Mystic.
The entire poem is awesome and worthy of geater things. Nice write.

mysticpoe

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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2003-06-19 04:32 PM


MysticDreamer:  Very good poem and I enjoyed reading it.  I especially like the 4th verse!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2003-06-19 10:30 PM


Very nice.  Joyce
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5 posted 2003-06-21 04:46 PM




(smiles) Yes indeed, and when we love, there is no such thing as walls, barricades, facades surrounding us, just the open air and horizon! (big hugggsssssss) God Blesn You, sweet friend, let loves grace always sing in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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6 posted 2003-06-21 04:53 PM


Very very true words! The power of love is unlimited.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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