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LayItDown
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since 2003-05-17
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0 posted 2003-06-03 07:41 PM


DREAM STEALER


Those of lesser vision
Restrain your decision
To climb higher height

In the name of
We know the score
They’ll escort you
To the door
Point you to
The common path
Keep you bound
To lower track

Dream Stealer
What you tryin’ to do
Creative treason
Got no time for you

Dream Stealer
People of reason
Question is
Who am I pleasin’

Tell tale signs
In the air
You’ve been pegged
As goin’ no where
Stay in your place
The human race
Our biggest dread
You runnin’ ahead
We’re doin’ our best
To be ever so kind
Know what’s best for you
Have your interest in mind

You’ve got a yearnin’
In you a churnin’
Higher vision
Burnin’ and burnin’
Time to decide
Who put it inside
You’re gonna glide
Spread your wings wide

Or
Get out the pattern
Trace your hand


© Copyright 2003 Jack Brown - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-03 10:19 PM


You know I was tapping my feet to this one, and obviously it could be done to rap, and done well.  Enjoyed!
mysticpoe
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2 posted 2003-06-05 04:25 PM


I could feel my feet dancing to the flow. Nice job.

mysticpoe

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3 posted 2003-06-07 07:41 PM




(smiles) Wow, I too read this as rap, dearest friend, you could become "the spiritual rapper" and spread grace and light through mainstream music! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, much enjoyed this, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jack, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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