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sweepea82
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since 2003-06-01
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0 posted 2003-06-02 05:10 PM


These things are temporary
They'll only pass away
So build up your tomorrows
From what you learn today.

So dream your dreams made up of Angel's Dust
And climb the mountains that you dare,
And when you're in the valley, Sweet Child,
Remember, God grows His flowers there.

So don't waste your time with worry,
Or lose your days to fret.
Remember, Ladybug, not to hurry,
And never have regrets.

This life is what you make it
This life is what you choose
And I can safely assure you
That in the Lord you have nothing to lose.

My Little Ladybug, I can't decide for you
But everyday I think and pray for you
That you will find your way
And make that choice for yourself, someday.

I love you more than you will ever know
And I smile to myself, watching you grow.
You are my gift from Heaven above
And when you smile, you shine God's love.

You are the gift I've waited so long for
And I know I could not have asked God for more.
God has blessed me with a child of Grace
And when I look at you, I see my Father's face.

[This message has been edited by sweepea82 (06-02-2003 07:04 PM).]

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Zodikry
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since 2003-06-02
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1 posted 2003-06-02 05:18 PM


Well I must first say I will be the first to deny religon (of any kind)  That part of my life is gone, but I can truthfully say WOW.

If there ever was a poem that could bring faith and help bring light to someone who is lost in the dark, Then...this is definetly the one.

Very up lifting and ... well... happy.  It's a happy poem and it really sends that vibe.

Love the wording, imigary and the rhymes...Good job.

                          -Matt

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2 posted 2003-06-02 08:05 PM


Nice rhyming poetry.  Joyce
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3 posted 2003-06-07 07:28 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a most beautiful dedication of love to your child, who will always fly gracefully like the ladybug! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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4 posted 2003-06-08 02:39 AM


What an enlightening poem.  Such sincere images in this rhyme devine, loved it.
mysticpoe
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5 posted 2003-06-09 09:18 AM


Outstanding sweepea!!

mysticpoe

LayItDown
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6 posted 2003-06-09 03:26 PM


Tender depiction of mother/daughter love.
A very fine poem, sweepea82.

Love,
LayItDown

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