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Brenda Hall
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since 2000-05-30
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0 posted 2003-06-02 11:39 AM



The Bible we know is a great book
Ten Commandments are vows we took
On the cross Christ's body bled
For out sins, the Bible said

People have done many things bad
I know his heart must be sad
Words are often said in vain
The good are often hurt or slain

The Lord moves in mysterious ways
For thanks we should, bow and pray
Our Lord is a dear friend indeed
He is always near when in need

© Brenda Hall
"the passionate poet"

The windows of the soul,reflect negative and positive images.Correct the negative and praise the positive

© Copyright 2003 Brenda Hall - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-02 02:02 PM


I loved your poem a great deal, and know of the forgiveness he shows first hand.  Nicely done.

                        

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2 posted 2003-06-02 07:59 PM


Well done.  Joyce
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3 posted 2003-06-03 08:44 AM


Thank you, Brenda.  I love your faith.
Poetry is a prayer, a cry of the human heart.

Love,
LayItDown

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4 posted 2003-06-07 07:32 PM




(sigh) The Lord is a friend, and should be everyones best friend as He is devoted to us all entirely more than one can ever be to their best friend! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, your words light up these pages like sunlight through stained glass on a Sunday morning, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brenda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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