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mysticpoe
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0 posted 2003-05-22 09:08 AM



from the withering
and into the night
the crossing
began, with tones
of olive scented hills
a belonging as such
who
would dismay, of the sight
they have seen
the truth now wanders
the seeds
and the World, to be.

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LayItDown
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1 posted 2003-05-22 12:38 PM


Reminds me of musings I might have in that no man's zone between consciousness and sleep.
Very creative.

Love,
LayItDown

mysticpoe
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2 posted 2003-05-22 08:27 PM


LayItDown, thank you for stopping by and your very nice comment. God Bless!!

mysticpoe

LoveBug
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3 posted 2003-05-22 11:45 PM


What a beautiful picture of, how I saw it, Christ in the garden.. you may have meant something different, but thats what I got from it. I wish I could get my point across that quickly, I'm rather long-winded!

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-05-25 03:36 PM


Very deep ...
the truth now wanders
the seeds
and the World, to be.

Love, Margherita

MysticDreamer
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5 posted 2003-05-26 08:15 AM


Definitely inspired by the muses. It has a feel to it that keeps you searching for the meaning.
Thanks for sharing this.
Good Will Always,
Mystic Dreamer

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-05-30 11:21 PM






(smiles) Sometimes the truth is right there over the hill, as they say, the grass is always greener on the other side! )big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, your words always captivate golden territory, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

mysticpoe
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7 posted 2003-06-05 09:07 AM


Love Bug, Margherita, Mystic Dreamer and Noah. Thank's to all for taking the time to comment. Along with LayItDown, I appreciate your sincere thoughts.

The Hill might have been the ending for some. It was the beginning for the World that we now live in. God Bless!!

mysticpoe

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