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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2003-05-17 07:28 PM


( A form starting with one syllable and adding a syllable each line for ten lines.


A Fun Form

I
know he
walked the earth
as a man when
He was God's own Son.
It matters not if She
or He when all's said and done.
Love and Goodness has no gender
though its very hard to comprehend
that God is not a She or He, but Friend.

Joyce 5/17/03

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (05-17-2003 07:29 PM).]

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A2J
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1 posted 2003-05-18 03:31 AM


enjoyed
Nan
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2 posted 2003-05-18 09:01 AM


And resides within - So we're most wise who strive to be our own best friend... Lovely write, Joyce...
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(smiles) This Friend truly is both He and She, for this Friend is a friend to everyone! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joyce, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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4 posted 2003-05-18 10:49 PM


Joyce:  I enjoyed your poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2003-05-20 10:15 PM


So beautiful and absolutely true.  It doesn't matter if God is a He or She, what matters is that God loves us for who and what we are and that God has the best intentions for us all.  Great poem.  Love your work.

Jesus lives in my heart!
Sheri Liegh Welna
(formerly Sheri Liegh Adams)
sheriliegh@reddens.ca

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6 posted 2003-05-20 10:28 PM


A Fun and Inspirational Poem in this Form or Forum or any Other. The Message is Clear.
Thanks for Sharing this.
Good Will Always,
Mystic Dreamer

LayItDown
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7 posted 2003-05-21 11:29 AM


I have to be honest, sister Joyce.  This "He" VS "She" thing stretches my small mind.  Kinda of like on the same order of me, as a man, having great difficulty relating to being "The Bride of Christ".

I'm sure everything is going to be cleared up real soon!    

Love,
LayItDown

Joyce Johnson
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8 posted 2003-05-21 01:06 PM


Me too.  I have always pictured God as a larger version of my daddy.  Love, Joyce
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9 posted 2003-05-21 03:21 PM


Hi Joyce, I like the way you look at him/her? or just God. They all consist of three letters. Like the three of the Holy Spirit. God Bless!!

mysticpoe

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10 posted 2003-05-21 03:22 PM


You must love your Dad a lot!
A bet he was/is a Godly man.

Love,
LayItDown

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