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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2003-05-14 01:29 AM



A Golden World


        
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Considering the butterfly
and how she makes her wings to fly
out from the captive walls of her cocoon.

Considering the sun and stars
and truly how minute we are
as we have just begun to scratch the moon.

If you look at all the people
and consider where they stand,
If you hold a child a little while,
then you’ll know that we’re held in God’s hands ...

In a golden world!!!Just outside the Son is shining!!!
It’s a golden world where everyone is smiling brightly!!!
It’s a golden world!!! ...and I’m so glad that I’ve got eyes to see

It’s a Golden World for you and me.

Considering the universe
and how each motion’s been rehearsed
to mold in perfect form our galaxy.

Considering the fall of man
and truly how complete God’s plan
that no redemption should know fallacy.

If you look at all the people
and consider where they stand,
If you hold a child a little while,
then you’ll know that we’re held in God’s hands ...

In a golden world!!!Just outside the Son is shining!!!
It’s a golden world where everyone is smiling brightly!!!
It’s a golden world!!! ...and I’m so glad that I’ve got eyes to see

It’s a Golden World for you and me.


-Lighthouse Bob


[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (05-14-2003 01:33 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-05-14 01:56 AM


It is indeed a very golden world, and you couldn't have sung it any nicer Bob.

GG
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2 posted 2003-05-14 03:56 AM


I can listen to the music to this as I read it.. just so beautiful. Makes me smile and see the sunshine thank you

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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3 posted 2003-05-14 01:36 PM


A lovely song, Bob.  Joyce
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4 posted 2003-05-14 02:27 PM


Bob:  This is really beautiful and you're right, it is a golden world!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2003-05-15 02:50 PM




(does happy dance) Yay! Oh Robert, this would make a beautiful hymn or song, sweet friend, I would love to hear you sing this and let that butterfly in your soul gain wings and fly out with melodic grace! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are what makes these pages golden too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

MysticDreamer
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6 posted 2003-05-16 10:55 PM


A Great Poem expressing perfectly the Wonders of Nature and God!
Thanks for sharing this.
Good Will Always,
Mystic Dreamer

LayItDown
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7 posted 2003-05-17 10:03 PM


Lighthousebob,

I appreciate your awe of God and positive outlook expressed in this poem.  It is a tender writing that speaks of someone who has been touched by the "Son's" golden love.

Love,
LayItDown

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8 posted 2003-05-22 11:59 PM


I think that you have captured so much of the beauty of God and His entire creation.. even His own thoughts, in this song. I really enjoyed this. Have you written in this format before? I don't remember hearing it, but I enjoyed it and I hope you do it more!

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

Margherita
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9 posted 2003-05-25 03:52 PM


Ah Bob yes, for those who have eyes to see, the world is golden. I love your poem, it's so full of true enthusiasm and wonder.
Love, Margherita

El_Campeador
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10 posted 2003-05-29 11:42 AM


Living in a golden world is worth more than gold itself any day. Yes, it's a golden world. Very beautiful, if we would throw away our blindness and see.

God bless,

El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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11 posted 2003-05-29 02:17 PM


very beautiful, I have lived in self imposed darkness for too long, it is good to see the blessings of the Son
Lone Wolf
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12 posted 2003-05-30 03:28 PM


Simply lovely writing, Bob.  I enjoyed this a lot today.  Thanks!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

jjote
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13 posted 2003-06-02 02:33 AM


Hi, Bob. Shall I turn on my speaker to hear your song. But no matter, even without that the words of your poem fairly sing by themselves. And I like the pic - goes well with the poem, so painstakingly and lovingly done. *clap, clap*
SPIRIT
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14 posted 2003-06-03 10:06 AM


Beautiful! Picture, words and read. A delightful start to my day.
mysticpoe
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15 posted 2003-06-05 04:27 PM


Nice write Bob, scratch the moon. I like that.
enjoyed.

mysticpoe

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16 posted 2003-06-07 04:42 PM


You write songs well!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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