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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-05-13 03:33 PM


Clean My Mouth

My poetry
Isn't the only reflection of me.
My speeches and e-mails,
My thoughts and actions,
Each
Is a reflection of me.

Clean my mouth
And my old thoughts,
Shaping them into
Something new.

Clean my mouth
Just like the Lord has said.
Empty my thoughts
So I am new.

As much as I didn’t aware,
My speeches shaped my thoughts,
In return thoughts become actions.
Speeches are thoughts,
Thoughts are actions.
Each impacts me closely.

©May 13, 2003

Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2003-05-13 05:27 PM


Lots of wisdom here, my friend.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2003-05-13 05:28 PM


Eliza:  Some interesting thought processes here and rather unusual subject matter.  I enjoyed reading it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2003-05-15 02:20 PM




(sigh) That is why words reflect who we are, actions are defined by the words and speeches are derived from the actions, and poetry is the liberty of all of this! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderfully and wisely said, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Musicmaker1969
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4 posted 2003-05-20 10:12 PM


Pretty deep, but very true!  Well written!

Jesus lives in my heart!
Sheri Liegh Welna
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LayItDown
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5 posted 2003-05-21 11:16 AM


aries_luv_ppl,

Good insight into that which can defile.
Who can tame the tongue?
We are pretty much what we think, eh?
You stir me to post a poem, same subject.

Love,
LayItDown


mysticpoe
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6 posted 2003-05-21 03:30 PM


Nice Job Eliza, your poem contains a message all should read. God Bless!!

mysticpoe

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