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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-05-10 05:21 PM

After thinking for some time,
I have come clear with what's on my mind.

I seek earthly relationship with men,
But not relationship with You.

I know you love me yet
Not believing you do love.

So much I wanted to be set free
Yet I believe your power not.

It's so sad that
I've become of who I am.

So sad...

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

ffpercent243
Junior Member

since 2003-05-04

Posts 37
United Kingdom

1 posted 2003-05-10 07:16 PM

"So sad", so like this beautiful poem.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-05-11 02:07 AM

yes this is a sad poem, but I donn't think this is you talking. Joyce

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2003-05-14 05:13 PM

I am so very proud of you that you have come clear with what is on your mind because so many of us never get to that point. I agree that God the Creator makes some pretty Awesome stuff... and at times it's very very difficult to keep the eyes on the Creator and not be totally consumed by the marvel and sometimes seduction of His creation. (Amen) I like this poem a lot. Thank you for sharing a bit of your mind here with us. God bless.

-Bob

Dark_Scythe
New Member

since 2003-05-14

Posts 5

4 posted 2003-05-14 06:28 PM

Hey ^.^ Very nice. I like how you word things. It seems to draw you in. Nice powm. Very sad and nice ^_^; I probably sound like a suck up... horrible me! >.>

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-05-15 02:17 PM

(big hugggssssss) Many philosophers have felt this way indeed; that God can't be both all omnipresent and all good and then He has to endure all the blame! (sad sigh) It is sad to see so many not fully recognizing the grace He has and what He can truly provide for us all that we just can't see, God Bless You, I send hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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