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Xeonox
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0 posted 2003-05-05 02:33 AM



When everything seems wrong,
And the one you trust-
The one up above-
Seems to have left you,

Do not give up hope,
For he thinks in advance,
All your stress will leave you,
According to his plans,

Faith shall not fade,
Do not feel anger,
He never leaves you-
Amongst strangers,

Let go of all your hate-
And see what he provides,
Not a road to and end-
But the one he helped you mend...


[This message has been edited by Xeonox (05-05-2003 02:34 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-05-05 02:23 PM


This is so true, and sometimes if we hold on just that little bit longer the light will be shining.  Loved the idea in this poem.

                 

Poet_Jenny_Lea
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2 posted 2003-05-05 05:01 PM


Oh, I loved this poem. Thank you so much for sharing. God will never leave us or forsake us.  Thank you again
/hugs
Jenny

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3 posted 2003-05-06 09:56 PM


You're so right Xeonex.  His time is not always our time.  Love, joyce
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-05-10 02:01 PM




(sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, this is a great message for all the youth of the world in hope they hold onto faith and choose to live to it and believe He is not to blame! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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