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0 posted 2003-05-03 02:26 AM



When the world seems dark,
And the dread of fear is cast,
When no net of hope appears,
To capture your mislead fears,

Think of me, and you shall see,
That life is only shortly lived,

Today you may cry.
And feel lost in time,
This confuse world often leads,
One hoping to die,

Think of me as your wall,
Cling on me with all your hope,

How do you survive?
The question left unanswered,
A war is brooding within,
Let the hope revive.


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1 posted 2003-05-03 02:35 AM


How very true and wise.  Today's trials and tribulations often give us a temporary sense of no hope, unless we lean on him.  Nicely done.

     

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-05-03 08:01 PM


I like this. We can have hope
through Him, can't we?
God bless,
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-05-04 01:17 PM


Yes, well done, hope is what keeps us alive and going. And hope He planted in our hearts.
Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2003-05-05 02:08 AM


Very nice. Reminded me of Jeremiah 29:11.  
Thank you for the poem,
Jenny

For God is our hope, if only we would but lean on him and let him take our burdens.

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5 posted 2003-05-05 03:44 PM


Nicely done and Inspirational. Thanks for sharing this.
Good Will Always,
Mystic Dreamer

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6 posted 2003-05-10 02:20 PM




(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, love hopes all things and I pray that between us all peace can be established with hope being the mission statement! (big hugggsssssss) This is so well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ronil, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-10-2003 02:20 PM).]

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