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Poet4Christ
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0 posted 2003-04-02 08:37 AM


Weak

Lord forgive me for my pain
For if my emotions had thier way
You would come and take this day
How long can I hold the tide
Inside the tears intensify
Your the only one I give full truth
But my prayers wait to hold true sound
Until I've fell hard upon the ground

If my emotions had thier way
You would come and take this day
Lord be with me, hold me still
For I am weak and collapse away


Timothy Work


-written this morning

He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26

© Copyright 2003 Timothy Work - All Rights Reserved
mysticpoe
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1 posted 2003-04-02 08:51 AM


Hi Tim, the Lord was holding you while you were writing this poem. The Lord never lets us go. Knowing him is being with him, as he is with you. God Bless!!

mysticpoe

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-04-02 09:31 AM


Tim,
Ultimate strength comes only from God.
He brings us power in our weakness.
God bless you,
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-04-02 10:59 PM


"The Lord is my strength and my song, and He has become my salvation"

"I will never leave thee nor forsake thee"

"Lo,I will be with you always, even to the end of the world"

I know a lot about what you're going through. I've been there too; in a place where you feel so weak and that sometimes you don't even want to go on. YOu can get through it, just trust in Jesus and He will bring you through. He brought me through and He still helps me every day. The apostle Paul said that God's strength is made perfect in our weakness, so that when we are weak, we are made strong. Have faith.. contact me if you want to, my ICQ and email are up there, and I Have yahoo and msn as well. God bless!

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

BSC
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4 posted 2003-04-03 02:42 PM


He'll never let you go Tim ~ He's there before we ever ask... very nice prayer.  Bonnie
Poet4Christ
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5 posted 2003-04-03 11:20 PM


Thanx guys, I just really needed to vent; poetry has always been there for me when I need a release.  I am better now; just got bogged down and had a really bad morning before I wrote this.  God bless all of you.

Thanx - Tim

He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-04-04 11:36 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Timothy, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart sends hugs your way as I know this feeling too but know in Him lies the greatest strength, I am but a witness for I almost ended my life but he saved me and in honor I turn to Him and center around His light! (sigh) I send special angel hugs of strength your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Timothy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Lighthousebob
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7 posted 2003-04-18 01:23 PM


Sorry, I'm a little late getting to read and to reply to your poem, but I am very very glad that you are doing better now and I do agree with you that poetry is a wonderful gift that God has given to us in order at times to vent our feelings and our emotions and this is a remarkable poem of your expressed venting. Reminds me of how very very fragile we truly are and how very quickly our circumstances change. (Amen) Good job.

-Bob

carol
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8 posted 2003-05-09 10:17 PM


Very nice read I enjoyed it

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Joyce Johnson
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9 posted 2003-05-09 11:01 PM


I don't know where I was when this was posted but I'm glad it came back.  I hope your days are better.  Love, Joyce
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