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ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 257
India

0 posted 2003-03-28 02:13 AM



Close up your eyes,

Open up your mind,

You will wake up,

In the world divine.

Close up your ears,

Voice of the holy,

you will hear.

Let loose all your senses,

And wake up your consciousness,

You will feel eternal happiness.

From the worldly morass,

Try to arise,

You will be in,

The divine paradise.

Try to give up,

worldly reasons,

You will wake up,

In the realm of freedom.

Try to spread,

The message of love,

And you will be showered,

Blessings from above.

From the illusion of Maya,

Break yourself free,

And the divine light,

You will see.

Fill everyone’s heart,

With the light of love,

Every one is equal,

Then each will know.

Humanity and moral,

Will then grow.

Brotherhood and harmony,

Will then flourish.

Wickedness and cruelty,

Will then cease to exist.

Enmity and selfishness,

Will then give in.

World will be a better place,

To live in.

Peace will be,

Then everywhere.

Hatred and evil,

Will then disappear.

Happiness will then,

Cease never,

But will flourish,

For ever and ever.



© Copyright 2003 Ambrish Parihar - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-03-28 09:22 AM


Excellent choice for the book submission.
Well done...Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-03-28 09:37 AM


ambrish, you did a real nice job with this. You should find a way to make 2 billion copies and disperse them around the World. Enyoyed.

mysticpoe

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2003-03-28 03:14 PM


Sotrue.  Thanks for helping to spread the word.  Joyce
edh
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since 2003-03-26
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4 posted 2003-03-28 04:40 PM


Ambrish.  I have only one problem with this piece. A lot of people seem to think that everyone has only one Father  and that is God.  However,  Jesus had no problem in his ministry telling certain individuals that your Father is the Devil.  Today is no different and it is time for the seperation of the Wheat from the Chaff and his Winowing
fan is in his hand.

Like grain on the threshing floor.

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
5 posted 2003-03-29 12:14 PM


W E L C O M E

You've led us through
what could be a most soothing,
uplifting and natural mind altering
meditation and spiritual journey from
darkness to enlightenment. I enjoyed your
poetic expression here very much.

Good job of writing and I think also that your poem will make a nice addition
to the coming anthology.


-Bob

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6 posted 2003-03-29 04:30 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ambrish, this is so very true, sweet friend, and I pray the day will come when we can all live happily together without corruption and governmental tyranny and hatred interferring with the remedy of peace and love! (sigh) This is very true, sweet friend, may we all hold this notion true, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ambrish, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-03-29 05:26 PM


Thia is a very good choice for
the book submission.  

Hugs,
Ethel

MissKlarmic
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since 2003-02-20
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Canada,N.S
8 posted 2003-03-29 08:22 PM


wonderfull, i thought at first it may be like one i wrote i titled from darkness to light yet its so different if not better then that. very plesent read u have my vote
Whippoorwill
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since 2003-03-12
Posts 60
Arizona
9 posted 2003-03-30 01:09 AM


Hi,
Wonderful writing of wisdom.  Did you know how much wisdom is in each word you wrote?
I believe your poem is inspiring even to the most wisest of wise.  I will read this poem often, especially when I am feeling as if there is no use to all the good overcoming all the bad. I will have renewed energy.
I love the way you stretch it out without trying to make it a long poem.  Nicely formatted and beautifully, innocently written.
Thanks, I vote for your poem because anyone who reads this poem will be reminded and inspired to the glory of God. And the goodness in faithful hearts.
In the Spirit, Whippoorwill

The breath of God and the breath of a   human comingled creates holy poetry.
  "Women Who Run With the Wolves"
    Clarissa Pinkola Estes Phd.

WhiteRose
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10 posted 2003-04-04 08:51 PM



SPIRIT
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11 posted 2003-04-07 01:23 AM


Lovely - very refreshing and I happily cast my vote.
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12 posted 2003-04-07 01:41 AM


What a lovely poem for submission and I wish to welcome you to Passions.  I know you enjoy the people here and all the activity in all the forums. If you need a hand finding your way around let one of the moderators know and we will be glad to help you.  

      
To be hugged by a friend is wealth beyond words.

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (04-07-2003 01:44 AM).]

Flower
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 240
California
13 posted 2003-04-08 02:31 PM


My vote is cast.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
14 posted 2003-04-12 10:13 PM


This is so good you have my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Lighthousebob
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15 posted 2003-04-18 09:58 PM


B U M P !!!

Up to the top for added exposure.

Musicmaker1969
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Peterborough, Ontario Canada
16 posted 2003-04-19 10:48 PM


I can hardly wait for forever to come.  Very nice poem.  Really fills the senses.

Jesus lives in my heart!
Sheri Welna
sheriliegh@reddens.ca

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