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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-03-25 05:10 AM


I believe
in the word.
(in a way most don't agree)
I concede
mistakes are ours
and love your creativity.

I don't believe
that you write books,
and even if I thought
you did...oh yes, you know--
I'd question you.
But I think you must have knew
that when you chose
to create

You knew this--

you created--

...me,

knowing I would love you too.

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (03-25-2003 05:11 AM).]

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-03-25 08:33 AM


Beautiful Serenity...enjoyed the read.
~Hugs, Nancy~


~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~


[This message has been edited by Enchantress (03-25-2003 08:34 AM).]

mysticpoe
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2 posted 2003-03-25 10:09 AM


HI serenity, I like it when poets delve into that realm which most don't. I always have felt that what you feel is what is real. Which brings me to the point of who is speaking to who? That is, was God speaking to you or were you speaking to him, or both? Nice thought path, enjoyed your writing.

mysticpoe

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3 posted 2003-03-25 10:16 AM


God reveals himself in many ways and he had his own way to show you the truth.  very nice.  Joyce
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2003-03-25 04:04 PM


Nancy, mysticpoe, and yes, the lovely poetess Joyce---

thank you

I felt that presence today and thought I'd pop in.

smile---thanks for having me here.


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5 posted 2003-03-25 11:38 PM




(sigh) And it is only an irregular notion because not everyone believes it but you can only imagine how good it can get and that it is possible and believing in the possiblr makes the notion more than politically correct! (kiss on cheek) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it, great to see you here again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-03-26 10:26 PM


I haven't been here in quite awhile, you know life and all has interferred...but tonight I finally had a chance, and I am so glad I could "pop in" ... I needed to read words like this.  Great write.  Bonnie
Lighthousebob
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7 posted 2003-03-28 06:09 PM


Some wonderful thoughts expressed here by you. The Word became flesh and dwelt among us...and His greatest gift to us I believe also is Love. (period) A person, or God for that matter, should not require much more from you nor I than that...  

To Love.

Let me say that it is wonderful to have you stopping in every now and then to post and that I really do enjoy reading your poetry that you choose to share with us here. God bless you.

-Bob

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8 posted 2003-03-28 06:42 PM


Serenity~
Well ... you just could have put my name in the title and He would have known just who this must be about~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MissKlarmic
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9 posted 2003-03-29 08:24 PM


fantastic write i enjoyed the read
garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-03-29 09:07 PM


Hi Karen,
I really liked this. It makes
the reader think.  
Hugs,
Ethel

Thomas119gold
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11 posted 2003-03-31 09:54 AM





serenity blaze
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12 posted 2003-03-31 02:16 PM


The warm welcome here has made me so happy.

Hugs to you all...


Mark Bohannan
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13 posted 2003-03-31 05:23 PM


Karen,

  You have no idea how big the smile on my face in seeing you in here.  This is a wonderful tribute as well as a testimonial as to that which envelopes you deep inside.  As far as I know, there are no requirements as to how you came to believe and accept other than that you just do.  The remarkable thing is that "He" gave us all the ability to look at the same thing and not two of us will see it exactly the same as another but none the less, we all have the ability to see it.  Some don't have the sight in their eyes and some do but the heart and soul paint their own image anyway.  Geezz, I just realized I am rambling so let me just say ... " Beautiful" and be done with it and hope that all the rambling had at least some sense in it. LOL  God Bless you sweet lady.

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