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Encarta
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0 posted 2003-03-07 05:17 PM


One of my friends had his finger cut off in school the other day.  Our teacher had us write get well cards for him.  Something odd to ask a class of seniors to do, but it was needed.  He's doing alright and all, and he's currently recovering from surgery.  I didn't have that long to come up with something, but here's what I wrote. (It's not that good, but I hope it proved the point)

God Is With US

As we walk through life
With joy and strife
God is right there with us

He hears our pleas
And suplies our needs
With his will and power to bless

And when the birds sings
Or the bees stings
He'll be the last the hide

And when someone prayed
In hopes to recive his aid
He's already by our side.

"They do not love that do not show their love.”-Shakespeare

© Copyright 2003 James M. Hohne - All Rights Reserved
Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
1 posted 2003-03-07 08:58 PM


This is the most beautiful kind of write of all, one from the heart written to heal.
Jason

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2 posted 2003-03-07 10:30 PM


Very nice and I hope they sewed the finger back on.  Joyce
littlewing
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3 posted 2003-03-08 05:53 PM


Encarta - sometimes few words are all that He needs - this is very good xxoo
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4 posted 2003-03-09 02:29 AM


What a great teacher you have first of all, to ask you all to send wishes to a classmate.  Secondly I bet your friend enjoyed each single one he got, and I would best this was a favorite.  I really enjoyed your wishes.

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-03-14 07:04 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh dear, I'm so sorry to hear this, God Bless that loving teacher for reaching out t him with all the rest of the class as we all need support like that when we are hurt! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, this brought tears to my eyes, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Whippoorwill
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since 2003-03-12
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Arizona
6 posted 2003-03-15 06:33 AM


Hi,
This is the sweetest, innocent poem.  I love the simplicity.  Makes the poem hit home for me.  Thanks Whippoorwill

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