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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Building Glory A glance upon the descending fire, upon the purple whispering cotton A gaze upon the maturing cover of blinking visions from afar A dream of your illumination through the opened vast expanse Through the rolling away of restless color down from far between the stars A visionary warmth of flight with siblings of grace and favor An anticipation of a return to light with blessed sons and daughters A search across the eastern line and through the heavens so densely spread Through the galaxies of twists and turns in search of our good father Timothy Work - I kept wanting to make this poem longer, but God didn't seem to want it that way. As I have said before - I have so much to learn about poetry. He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! And I too love it just how long it is for just knowing we are all part of this journey and we will reach Him is such a beautifully meditative response! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Timothy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-01-2003 01:33 PM).] |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Very nice descriptive poetry. I noticed that most of the focus of this poem was on the heavens and so in my mind I see a person or myself looking into the vastness of the heavens with an anticipation of the return of the ultimate Light or of our God. I also get a sense of flying and discovery from this poem. Again, a very descriptive poem that, for me, is filled with anticipation and with Light. God bless you again my friend and thank you for sharing. -Bob |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Noah - Thanks again for the beautiful response. Bob - I can't wait; there is much anticipation here. I often wonder what it will be like when Jesus returns. Bless you guys, you are great. Thanks - Tim He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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