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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-02-27 12:42 PM



Melted

i lie here
a puddle of who i am
without you, Lord

it began
with tears
weeping my spirit,
unexplainable tears,

but surely tears
that had to be spent,
rent.

rent to relieve
pressure,
pressure built
without knowledge,
without reason
that i am able to
comprehend.

tears
that have flown
into a flood of me
needing Thee.

please, Lord,
accept my tears
this melted me,
and form me
into Your love,
Your creation,
Your servant,

Yours.

©February 26, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2003 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
1 posted 2003-02-27 12:48 PM


Changing form for the Lord.  Good work Vas   Joyce
Poet4Christ
Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211
Oklahoma City
2 posted 2003-02-27 10:26 AM


Very beautiful and humble.  Humility and trust are so important.  To let God take our disenigrating form and shape it to his will is one of God's most beautiful processes of love and communication.
God bless you VAS- Tim

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
3 posted 2003-02-27 05:02 PM


Beautiful!
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-02-27 08:42 PM




(big hugggsssssss) And with Him He will feel these tears and console us with His hugs of light and convince us He was there all along and there is a reason why He made us cry which we will understand soon enough! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
5 posted 2003-02-28 10:16 PM


I do love these kind of meetings where we meet with the Lord just to come and reason together. For me, it has been way too long since I have wept before the Lord like this.... Without reason and uncontrollably in His Presence. Just crying and crying as God speaks, through his Holy Spirit, Love, Life, Hope, Grace, etc. etc. into my spirit (So much pure emotion all at one time that it cannot be humanly contained) WOW!!! It is such a wonderful cleansing and refreshing that takes place I so remember..... Very well described here my friend that your poem has left me longing for more-- So very much more. God bless.

-Bob

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