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LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2003-02-17 01:27 PM



Fingers dip under the water
and they emerge
wet
clean
Three times they slide beneath the surface
Mouth hot, breath sweet
water fills,
pumped like a beating heart and released
three times
Hands are cupped,
and released as cascading crystal
spills through my fingers
three times
i brush some into my nose,
again three times
hands garmented with fragments of water and light
run over my head and neck
swirling in and out of ears
i wash up to my elbows on each arm
three times splashing water over me
then each foot and ankle recieves three rinses

my breaths are deep and full
purified
I stand shoulder to shoulder
with all my sisters
we stand in back, proud
behind our brothers

heads bowed,
words serenade the dimly lit room
every solemn breath is breathed for Him
words in my ears smooth and slick like silk at times

an ocean, oceans away from here in every direction
at this moment
beneath the purple sky
bands of my brothers, my sisters line up too

i imagine the air there is the same as it is here
somehow always the same
when man is humbled before Him, together in a moment

I am face to face with faith
Shoulder to shoulder with my sister
She is me, I am her
We bend together
speak together
kneel before Him
together
standing finally,
and repeating, once to the left
once to the right,
"As salaam 'alai-kum
wa rahmatu' allah"

"Peace be upon you,
and the mercy of Allah"

   Tai


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1 posted 2003-02-17 01:49 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, and know that Allah watches over you and all and in times of great need he will provide strength and nourishment to you always! (big hugggsssssss) This is a wonderful prayer, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tai, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2003-02-17 06:07 PM


I love the unity here expressed in your poem be it the Canaanite Elat, Hebrew El or Elohim, or Aramaic Alaha all summed up in a single word expressed as 'Allah' or as I most familiar refer to as 'GOD' and, yes, let 'Bismillah' for as it is to me an all inclusive expression that means in simple terms that everything that we do (breathe, live, write, exist) be only accomplished because and through the Grace and Love of our Great Creator. ....Oh, I love the purification along with the unity that you've expressed here that you have with your brothers and sisters.... and of course I join you in your prayer and in your desire, my friend, that Peace and the Mercy of (Allah) GOD be upon us all. (Amen)

-Bob

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3 posted 2003-02-20 12:12 PM


A lovely, humble, proud poem.  May your Allah be pleased.  Joyce
SPIRIT
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4 posted 2003-02-25 10:16 AM


This is a beautiful write. How lucky we are to live under the heavens of a Supreme Being who bears many different names yet unites us all in faith and grace.
mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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5 posted 2003-02-28 02:27 PM


I read this poem a few times and found it to be very intense. The last couple of times that I read it, I read thru it fast and the poem seem to come together and began to  intrigue me. Nice job.
cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02
Posts 217

6 posted 2003-03-02 07:30 PM


Wow... that is so magical.  Gentle intensity, profound prayer... just amazing.  

Beautiful... I am just speechless; you have taken my breath away.  Wonderful.  Wow.

THANK YOU so much for this truly divine whisper from God!

Love,
Moca

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