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jjote
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since 2002-12-25
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Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-02-08 10:00 PM


(Hey, and it's a Sunday morning over here, I'm too lazy to complicate my life with rhymes, meters, or ballads. So this poem is dedicated to the fears we have for a possible war coming???)


Why are the skies blue no longer.
the clouds gathering in clumps of grey,
where moments ago there were
soft wisps of gossamer white?

Why do the winds whistle
more loudly than before,
shake the trees to their very roots
gentleness giving way to violence?

The ocean waves rock the ships to terror.
The small fishes hide beneath the surface.
Not in sight are the dolphins
leaping above the waters.

And I, puny creature, stand dazed,
while the world teeters on the edge of madness.
I look down from a precipice, wavering,
should I just jump into oblivion?

BUT - if You, my Lord,will take my hand
I shall fly with style and dignity.
I shall walk calmly above these troubled waters.
I shall need less of myself and more of You.

IF YOU BUT TAKE ME UNDER
THE SHADOW OF YOUR WINGS, LORD.

[This message has been edited by jjote (02-08-2003 10:03 PM).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-02-08 10:53 PM


For a lazy person you did a wonderful job.  Thank you for these words.  May they fall on the right ears.  Joyce
SPIRIT
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2 posted 2003-02-08 10:55 PM


This is so well stated. May we all live with peace and harmony, at least within ourselves, beneath the shadow of HIS wings.    
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3 posted 2003-02-08 11:52 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) Yes, He is here for us all in any circumstance and will do the best He can to prevent such ridiculous measures, though of course we need to help Hi out for it is up to us! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you should consider posting this here:
http://poetsagainstthewar.org/

This is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Josefina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

jjote
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4 posted 2003-02-09 12:11 PM


And aren't you all asleep yet? must be midnight there?
Thanks for the read.

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2003-02-09 11:03 AM


Its a shame that the world can't live as he inteneded us to, in peace in harmony.  Wonderful write.
Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2003-02-13 04:24 PM


...and your own unique style of writing is most perfect, my friend, because it comes direct from your thoughts without all the above mentioned mumble jumble.  I love the clear mental picture of God taking you in His arms (Shadow of His wings) and holding you up as you walk above those turbulent waters. Beautiful imagery here.

-Bob

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7 posted 2003-02-14 02:10 PM


jjote:  You have voiced so well, what many of us are thinking and feeling.  Happy Valentine's Day!

Betty Lou Hebert

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